Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Writing, Writing, Writing

Now that the comps are over, I feel like I am finally catching a bit. Also, I just finished a marathon grading session. I don’t know why I have papers from 4 different classes due on the same day and, worse, I promised the students that they will be returned in a week!!! Oh well, I got them graded and returned at the expense of several brain cells and blurred vision. Grading papers for ESL students is definitely a challenge. The process involves some degree of deciphering, not because of grammatical errors, but because the idiomatic elements of English pose continual difficulties for the students. I find that if you read closely, most of the time there is a very logical use of the language to communicate meaning. (No surprise of course) I have a student who persists in using the idiom “to make do” as a synonym for management! He gets frustrated with literal and nonliteral usage, with good reason! It is easy to take for granted how much of the odd intricacies of English we, as native speakers, never question. In spite of these issues, it is really kind of interesting to view my native language through someone else’s eyes. Also, as I read the papers, I continually come across phrases that, I am absolutely convinced, are not incorrect or accidental. Another student of mine commented about when she graduated from Architectural design school in her country and she described the feeling as “sunshine on my heart”. I thought it was a beautiful way to show the excitement of a new future and the relief of having survived 4 years of hard work. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t rhapsodize about every unusual statement, some of them are down right confusing or wrong but some are really a breath of fresh air. If I ascribe to any rule of writing it’s that a fresh way of seeing the same thing (or feeling) is really a noble goal and more often that not, my students accomplish that goal without even realizing it. On a more disheartening note, I am shocked that some teachers still insist on grammatical correctness as a measure of intelligence and good writing. Of course, that is a part of the process. But I don’t think you need to know how a combustion engine works before you can drive a car. A bad analogy I am sure. But I have been really concerned about some students in other classes that are struggling because their teacher only marks surface errors on their papers, and apparently makes to effort to try and understand what they are trying to say. I really get upset about this! I can’t believe the remnants of the Stone Age pedagogy are alive and well in some corners of this campus!! I am going to walk my dogs and vent further….

3 comments:

Kent said...


I am shocked that some teachers still insist on grammatical correctness...


If you're referring to teachers in disciplines other than English, this comes as no surprise. WAC didn't have the impact we thought it did, apparently. If you're referring to English teachers, I can understand your reaction. Yet, there are some who still teach composition using the modes. We're talking real dinosaurs here.

Enid Pope said...

I have three ESL students and I am having an interesting yet somewhat difficult time grading their work. After grading so many first year papers, looking at ESL writing doesn't always look that bad, though! LOL

I don't do the constant bashing of surface errors. I get that they are learning a second language and I don't want them to feel like they are going to be scolded everytime they turn something in. Honestly, some of the American students don't have the best grammar either!

I did have a particulary difficult time the other day with a student using "pretend" for "intend." He used it five times. I don't know if it was the 15 portfolios I had read before his or because it was 11 PM, but I could not make the connection. Although there were many other grammar issues I ignored, I did make a note by the first "pretend" and asked, "do you mean intend?" I felt like I had to because he was using it so much - but it did take me a really long time to decide to even do that.

I do feel bad sometimes because I can't explain some grammar issues to ESL students like they need them to be explained. It can be a challenge.

cristina said...

Yes, I understand your frustration with teachers consumed with grammer. They need to read an essay by Nancy Sommers entitled "Responding to Student Writing." Perhaps, you can suggest having a workshop on this subject and share some research with others. I wish that I had expertise in the area of ESL issues, but I struggle as well.